Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Mermaid Fire Brigade

First things first. That typeface on the old cover was a mess. Here's a reboot of the title text.

Hmmmm. This one's kind of a mess too.


Alysa Stewart said...

i like it all except for the top A. I think if it looked more like the bottom A than like a lower case D, it would really be quite fun!

Nathan said...

Good call, although I do like how the "r" and the "a" frame the "m." I'm thinking of doing another revision where the "Fire" is rendered in a different style.

Helene said...

I agree with Alysa about the "A".
The whole style though, is adorable. I personally love how the "Fire" looks, but you are the arteest.