Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Mermaid Fire Brigade, title pass 2

This book is starting with a little more processy-behind-the-scenes stuff than usual. Here's another take on the title. And a few quick character sketches.

6 comments:

Tasha said...

Is it just me or do one of the mermaids have Medusa looking hair? I still love this idea by the way...

buttercup said...

We like the original cover with the mermaids riding the whale. Can't wait to see the story! We're excited!

Nathan said...

Don't worry, the original cover with the whale is solid--I'm just reworking the font.

megwrites said...

Ooh, I like these character drawings. I love the idea of combining a traditionally girly thing (mermaids) with a traditionally boy thing (firefighters). As a mom of three girls, I get tired of all the girly princessy pink stuff.

victoria said...

I like the new font - it draws attention to the Mermaid-Brigade rhyme. Looks like fun! Can't wait to see what's bugging that curly-haired mermaid.

Anonymous said...

AMAZING! The mermaids look great, too - my favorite is the one on the right.