Wednesday, May 25, 2011

Mermaid Fire Brigade 8


I knew when I started that Mermaid Fire Brigade was going to be a lengthy project--more a graphic novel than a picture book. I've got a long adventure planned for the girls (and Carlos.) I may have to break it into chapters if it starts running too long. How do you like it so far?

7 comments:

  1. I like it. I wish I could read it all at once––but I suppose you have a real job too.

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  2. Woot! But I have to say I just saw the latest "Pirates" and the mermaids seem scarier than they used to.

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  3. I'm liking it so far! I'm less confused now that I know it's going to be more graphic-novel length, since it had seemed like things were moving a tad slowly for a picture book--but it all makes sense now :)

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  4. I really like it. I especially liked the way you framed the pictures of shark coming toward the mermaids it looked so ominous that "Hi Carlos" was such a funny suprise.

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  5. It makes my day to see the new comic pages up! I never thought I would love a shark as much as I already love Carlos!

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  6. I was sensing that it was more than just a picture book. I am happy with a graphic novel and happy with this so far. More is more.

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  7. Awesome last panel: "I want a job!" Mermaid Fire Brigade- helping the country's work force, one comic at a time....

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